Polished shoes in a puddle
Back street blowjob
Half of out
My arthead disposal
Headnotes
Another Negroni
Stable commitment
A banister
Tinker talk champagne cinema
Dinner and huitres
A dressage chick
With lips thick
And sore
Knees white/
bra black panties
Bent over bet
is this the way you think all writing should be? or more specifically, are you happy with this poem? or are there things you'd change about it? we can criticize all we want, but if its justifiable by the artist, that makes the piece perfect in a way. nay? just trying to gauge your own stance on your writing.
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